Some writing assigments over the years of my high school career have really helped me progress in writing essays. for instance in freshmen year I wrote an essay on The Odyssey and it really helped me with a 5 part paragraph and how to do one. i have also learned to understand the sections of a essay and how important each section is and what chunks you need to have it be good essay.
When writing an essay I have to be open to ideas that be creative with words to use or transitions to select for my essay. I need to be able to completly understand the subject so i can write a good essay and have enough to write about. I need to have good vocab and speak clearly for the reader to understand what i mean.
This is an important concept from the novel that definitely effects our lives. However, I think your discussion of alcohol abuse in the novel is superficial. Try to incorporate your quotes into the body of your writing to achieve a more cohesive effect.
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